Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Claustrophobia Comments

Rating: 5.0

For a patch of happiness
you rushed into the arms
of clouds. Only to fall back with tears.
The glazing authority of moon
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William Jackson 03 January 2008

There is so much to comprehend in this poem. It is brilliant. The first stanza alone is more than I can wrap my head around on a first reading. Thank you. I love your work.

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Goldy Locks 31 October 2007

ps: Is irrational pain - true pain?

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Goldy Locks 31 October 2007

The flameless fire collapses lapping up the anger. ending took me by complete surprise... and that's what it's about. best care, sjg

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