~ Éclat Trio de l'Amour ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
28 March 27,2010
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A deep thoughtful poem....well expressed thoughts and feelings through poetry...
Simple and sweet; shows that the best poems can be the shortest. Keep writing (:
The birth and rebirth of love as it is one and the same with life. Mans gift to love...Loves gift to man...our gift to love eternal! ! ! Well done. Love it
Short and sweet, to the point. the trio of love melt ing, merg ing, and emerg ing. Action>merge>emerge.[ in full view, in a state of gladness, madness, or whatever]My dear, you did poetry good again! a 10+++++
Fantastic and practical for newcomers and seasoned [further renewal lolol] Emergence in one US is the best culmination It’s also a dip-stick-test poem for everyone [to purge blemishes if any] 10+++
Sleek, silken, coruscant in a frugal way… French title is lambent…exclusive and exhaustive Enjoyed by all heart thanks a zillion for such a poem.. 10++
Beautiful poem. Short but very sweet. Quite interesting too Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing with me
Brevity of Haiku mingled with passionate juice of love.fantastic Niv.Ur passionate poetic soul really gets melted in this nice poem and your new poetic self emerges after getting merged with the poetic fervour.
very nice and interesting poem. i like your economy of words.
l'amor is melting into one from a love triangle. One male, two females or one female, two males, what a thrill...cheers
Had it not been for your glossary, it would have been beyond my comprehension. The trio, surely is too sizzling.10
wonderful! ! ! Short but beautiful.. Nice poem.I like it most.Thank your Dear NIV
Really nice simple expression. Reminds me that love is best when kept simple. Tout le jour l'amour. bonne poésie