Monday, March 10, 2008

Classy Voyagers Comments

Rating: 4.3

A Thames barge bobbed about on a choppy sea,
Its brown canvas sails welcoming the winds strength.
One sturdy craft, well built with good width and length,
Making its way towards the wooden jetty.
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Ernestine Northover
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Paul Butters 12 October 2009

Still love this solid poem, and watching the sea myself......

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Andrew Blakemore 23 March 2008

It's a real shame when little pieces of history are lost forever. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Andrew x

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Alison Cassidy 12 March 2008

The traditional ABBA style you employ in this poem perfectly mimics the grandeur and 'class' of your subject. A superb descriptive piece painted in oils and hung in a gilt frame. Stunning work. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Chuck Audette 11 March 2008

This poem about the ship returning home - I love how you re-port it.. -chuck

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Debora Short 10 March 2008

What lovely poem, Ernestine! I love wooden boats and tall ships there is such a connection to heart and soul, their bones each hand-crafted with the true love only master shipbuilder can impart.

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Lynda Robson 10 March 2008

A nice nostalgic write Ernestine, I also am not familiar with the barges you mention but enjoyed reading about them here, thanks, Lynda xx

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2008

Aim becomes clear, please forgive a fool for showing his ignorance, this is still a beautiful write all-the-same Love duncan X

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