Tuesday, August 5, 2008

! Classic Encyclopedia! Comments

Rating: 3.0

Beyond dreams an underlying truth
bewilders relevance of existence and there
a sun shines to dawn with unique rays of hope
to subside shadows of disappointments
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Rema Prasanaa
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Kesav Easwaran 16 August 2008

poem very good...much insight there...the second and fourth stanzas in particular reveal a lot on the myth of life...ten grade

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 August 2008

An exceptionally good work with deep philosphical understanding and portrayal of bare truth.Words and metaphors are aptly placed to give it an excellent imagery. good work. my 10

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Indira Babbellapati 09 August 2008

the fullness of life in a collage!

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2008

'Mystery in one enigmatic concealed package called life......classic encyclopedia'..wonderful.Touching truth.Extraordinary write reflecting the real life10and many more stars

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Onelia Avelar 06 August 2008

I like your concept about that classic encyclopedia and especially the last stanza...'and universe plainly smiles away at the helplessness of its own very inmates...' The smiling universe, turning pages of mystic theories on its classic encyclopedia...so vivid, animated image. Classy! (o.a.)

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