Tuesday, December 7, 2004

Class Excursion Comments

Rating: 3.9

It was the last and final day of their school year,
the atmosphere quite festive and excited.
And Christmas carols lullabied the ear,
when Mr. Gallus from his rooms alighted.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kelly Allen Vinal 07 December 2004

Excellent excursion into subtle rhyme and powerful imagry.

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Lenchen Elf 07 December 2004

Nice point H, one should always lead by example: -)

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