Friday, December 18, 2009

Clash Of Swords Comments

Rating: 5.0

The battlefield, a lonely hill, upon a country field
The enemies stand facing each other, swords drawn
They charge at each other, swords clashing
Swords swing, matching each other
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Conor Ross
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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 December 2009

Your swords are very sharp like life, Good attempt Conor!

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Zachary Glitch 18 December 2009

This reminds me of my favourite books and movie: The Lord Of The Rings. Good job. Keep it up. :)

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Marieta Maglas 18 December 2009

They charge at each other, swords clashing wonderful descriptive poem belonging to symbolism, very well written. 10

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Omar Ibrahim 18 December 2009

i think i had an epiphany from this poem....i liked it really.thanks for sharing!

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