Clarity In A Quagmire Comments

This is really great sis, and it has a definite message for everybody. The heart must be made of glass because it can break or shatter into tiny pieces. But when love comes from the soul, it is a true love and will last forever. If my man strayed too far from the palace, and 'shacked up' with his former lover, then his clothes and everything else he owned would be on the front lawn, and the locks would be changed. The imagery here is vivid, and the wording is perfect. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

In my mind this poem created a feeling of fragmentation, like the disjointed thoughts that it portrays. As always you have created an atmosphere that carries the reader along with the feelings of the poet. Now I need to know if resolution was ever reached!