Sunday, November 8, 2009

Clarity Came Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Exhaustion was my middle name last night
Sleep was my long lost best friend
Rest was beckoning me, begging me for a chance
Finally, my soul and my body gave in.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 13 November 2009

I particularly liked the use of language, the flow of ideas, the construction. You took me from sleepless frustration to realisation and on to quietness of mind in a few short but beautiful lines. Thank you again for another gem June!

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