Clarity Comments

‘…Desires will not end even with full of coffer…’ Desire is flame brightens by ungratifications…remedy is contentment with little… But we’re in whirlpool of consumerist society …provoking ... enticing… Gluttering without satisfying 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Nothing comes in the way for trying well Excessive zeal may create position like hell Good rain may result more yields in crops

It may not happen all of sudden It will be adding more of burdens Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind

Clarity is a cloudy and vague part of my life.So thank you my friend for trying to open my eyes to its rightfull space in my time. Really enjoyed the poem and the message it sends is full of clear a nd meaning full emotion. John

Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind Not to loose peace with gesture always kind..................yet vision needs clarity, wonderfu words of wisdom as wrought by imagery, good rhyming too,10+++, thanks for sharing

dear, you never satisfy by your poems but every one do as you are the best poet as i think so, as usual this poem is also nice one, this is obvious to be so keep writing and reminding us that you are doing best best wishes luwi

'Wisdom should prevail'- well said! A good theme and form! Congrats!

We will continue to suffer Even with large stocks of buffer Golden opportunities with lucrative offers.........10

makes a nice reading fine write10+++

its very thoughtful and creavty kept it up 10++

I like your art of writing. Always, you write beautifully. Good poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it

Wisdom should prevail with calrity in mind Not to loose peace with gesture always kind. This is a good finish.

Nothing comes in the way for trying well Excessive zeal may create position like hell Good rain may result more yields in crops.....10

Even with large stocks of buffer Golden opportunities with lucrative offers Desires will not end even with full of coffer.........10

Nothing comes in the way for trying well Excessive zeal may create position like hell Good rain may result more yields in crops......10

Priority for needs and availability must Best things available but allow it to rust......10

Wisdom should prevail with clarity in mind Not to loose peace with gesture always kind......10

Words have a lot of good pointers.

Habit of looking back is very good and essential quality Serves as pointer for its best use and utility......10

It is tendency to ask for more New horizons and areas to explore ......10