Clare Sonnet For Love Universe Comments

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

it touched me. Thank you for this lovely poem 10+

I conceal you in my soul as an ancient skald, As I hold back the moonlight in my emerald. And I feel your pain by touching your tear, When gentle I incline myself for loving you my dear.no it is not obsolete love but eternal and pure feeling... i may definitely succedd...lovely imagination and step in right direction....10 read mine she did not come...mry to marry.....miss i miss you

a poem with emotional ideas, lovely to read 10

a poem with high emotional content...............

From : kgnti dkritjgmdlo (west goshen wisconsin United States; Male; 43) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 8/6/2009 3: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Great poem. Hello, I read your poem 'Obsolete Quiver Of The Universe'. I am really impressed with your talent and it is nice to see that modern-day women can still place the aspect and emotion of love in such high regard.Take care of yourself and farewell.

Will the comet fly through moons shadow will Venus carpet mars does mons play on the plateau..iip

I cant pick a favorite part, i love it all. It fed my romantic soul. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem and your talent with us. :)

both planet venus and your clean eyes, i love this line.a philosophical and a romantic poem.lovely write.thanks10.

'Because I know so well that from the same clay Our bodies and Galaxy have been made yesterday'... You nicely bring in philosophy into your good romantic poem Marieta..thanks...10

Reading the poem makes me think you have a unique style of putting words to life; playing with emotions and thoughts. Inter weaving magic so others can flow with your forceful wishes in joy.

read some of your poems, liked them, thanx for your comment on my poem STOIC SILENCE,

Because I know so well that from the same clay Our bodies and Galaxy have been made yesterday.....bonding even in eteral and heaveny abode... beautiful write and deserves attention... read mine...... butterflies aroubd, o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too? comment too

wonderful poem.....stunning imagery...... loved it.

That from the same stones could forever envies Both planet Venus and your very clean eyes...................... oh what a imagery of love by planet of Venus all when curved on stone by the caving eyes burn brilliant in the room of desire yet come and behold untold art of love........most evocative with eloquent flow of passion, yet it overwhelms being betiding on the sweet edges of luscious glow across the shore of ingenuity, m 10++++, thanks for sharing

a poem with high emotional content.excellent write. voted10 surya

Written with great style and impact.

wonderful reading.. esp. the last stanza.. nice scripted.