Friday, April 25, 2008

Clanging Silver Comments

Rating: 4.0

All I own is hurting me
Unknown, unshown, inscribed in me
A picture perfect phantasy
A veil to hide iniquity
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Matt Pocock
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Sonny Rainshine 25 April 2008

Perfectly musical and exquisitely rhythmic. Every line sings.

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Matt Pocock

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