Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Clamour Comments

Rating: 5.0

His clammy lungs still breathe in the mysterious Oxygen
And breathe out the hazardous Carbon Dioxide.
Though it's dangerous the kind flora absorb and in return patiently give us the precious air to survive.
Oh! What a masterful chain reaction is this?
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 06 February 2009

This strongly evocative poem is dedicated to the beautiful environment that man is slowly but inevitably destroying with his bulldozers and his greed. May I add my voice to your dedication to Susie Gharib. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 07 October 2008

Two brave souls who are surviving. Glad to see the dedication to Susie Gharib. She will never be forgotten by her poemhunter friends. Take care. As always, Sandra

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