Saturday, January 12, 2008

Claiming The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.4

It was childhood enchantment in the form of song
Which first awoke in me, the rainbow-lover
Entranced as ‘Dorothy’ sang of
Her wish to someday fly far over
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Mary Havran
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Manonton Dalan 28 January 2016

I make my own rainbow with coalition with sunlight

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ngaio beck 06 March 2008

I deduce by the abundance of supportive and loving commentary you must be a person of some popularity.I would like to respond to this piece solely on its' quality.It speaks to me, (as I am sure it must to others) , in a language of evocative beauty. Ngaio Beck

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Prasanna Kumari 07 February 2008

lovely... rainbow is for everybody to feel an ownership personally...any poet's own.read my rainbow poem 'Hey, there' if you are interested

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Nancy Chambers 30 January 2008

Another beautiful poem!

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Xevlyn Berrada 27 January 2008

The rainbow... A phenomenon I've always admired, and materialized...the metaphorical rainbow is something I long for, and maybe the reason why I fight and go on. Thank you Mary, for your comment and the heartfelt words by the way... I really admire the way you write, it's so professionnal. Keep it up :) Xevlyn

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Emma Corwin 23 January 2008

I can't collect real rainbows but I have added your poem to my collection of poems about them.

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Original Unknown Girl 18 January 2008

Couldn't agree with more with all you say, though of course I always thought that the rainbows were for me! (I guess that they are big enough for us all to share huh?) Interesting write. HG: -) xx

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Scarlett Treat 16 January 2008

So, from one rainbow lover to another, I saw a double the other day, and it was just awesome...so I calimed it for my very own. My daughter sent me a picture of a triple the other day...so I don't know who claims that one! Maybe it was for you?

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Duncan Wyllie 14 January 2008

You say it well.. i think that to see the rainbow truly, first you have to view it from the heart and second you have to 'VIEW IT FROM THE HEART' Love duncan X

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This deserves at least three reads. It's a stunner, and so is its penner. t x

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Thad Wilk 12 January 2008

Beautiful write Mary! ! A real pleasure to read this poem, Thank you! ! ! *10*! ! Thad

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