Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Claiming Religious Comments

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She wrote so soft as if an angel
And as if she sang a hymn
More so..she prayed to save others
She knelt for hours
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Ayi Escalona
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Deodath Debideen 30 October 2009

Seems that you unmasked a she-wolf. Diablos are everywhere now!

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David Desantis 30 April 2008

I love how the whole tone of the poem changes dramatically in the 2nd stanza. Great work friend.10/10

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Martin Ayankola 22 April 2008

An incisive poem. There are so many wolves in sheep's clothing in the world.

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