Monday, November 10, 2014

Claim Your Birthright Comments

Rating: 5.0

From a land afar you have come
To find your dream rainbow
Secure your family and income
Settle in for a greater tomorrow
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Paul Sebastian
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Valsa George 13 November 2014

Fantastic.....! ! What great counsel....! It cannot be otherwise, for it is given by God! Enjoyed the total spirit of the poem and enjoyed each line! The story of the immigrants who migrate to alien lands and wait patiently to have a foot hold in life! Top marks!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 November 2014

wonderful expression of thought during the troubled period..Yes, we have to claim our birthright, from another 'KLite'

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 10 November 2014

So beautiful, Paul. This is also a story of many refugees, who come to a new land and wait to be accepted and start a new life and have waited for many years. The claim for a birthright is rooted in the faith in the heart, in God who is there to help them. And for many among them, this victorious faith in a brighter tomorrow has proven true in their dreams which are fulfilled after long patience, hope and faith.

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