Civilized Comments
if you go behind the clouds
and you’ll see the fireflies’ lamp
you will see the bottle of tears
lock inside the terrors hearts.
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This is excellent. It's wonderful to find a beautiful poem but also full of deep ideas.
You fluent like a river, very true werite Grace you are wonderful in description.......10++++++++
very well inspired naidz...we do have a lot to learn from nature especially a peaceful stature...very well done
WOW WHAT A POEM! IT'S PEARLESS AND I FEEL THAT YOU ARE REALLY AN INBORN POETESS. YOUR VERSIFICATION SUPERB.
Wow! This is terrific...I love the lines in the first and the second stanza, beautifully worded. I never thought that you could write such pretty lines.I didn't make a mistake to choose you as one of my favorites. Great write Lady, applause 10+
the cover we wear 'civilized' is made of blood and tears.........
I like the way this poem makes one ponder... This was poetic and well crafted a work of a master mind
use not the power of bullets but the power of mind use not the influence but the honest lies....we should be civilized enough to tell hones lies if that situation arises but lies are after all lies.... i appricaite the rare quality in potess. she has winderful abiility to influence the reader's mind....10 read mine.. no to violence....step mother and forgiveness
Etremely fine poem on mankinds woes maybe we should follow your star-thanks++++++++10 Beaut poem regards
brilliant verses an inspirational point of view...great poem.....10
Beautiful and rich with thought...lovely composition....You have made me proud my fine lady....stunning work 10+++++++++++++++ all the way
Beautifully constructed and a strong message to think on......10 + + + Fay
A lovely piece lady Grace...ans a superb sequel to Jon's Civilisation....
We can learn many things from the nature. God made man to be kind to man and other creations. In the name of civilization, man created many rules and regulations, which are followed by some but not followed by many. You have handled the subject 'Civilized' very nicely.
Eloquent peace. Superb poetry. Beautiful rejoinder to a great poet. CP
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‘peace the objective and the purpose.’…world needs much…Nature teaches in myriad ways but we’re blindfolded…self created…when will come GOK …POK? Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for peace] - GOK = God only know POK = Poet only knows n