Friday, February 3, 2012

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Even these wonderful inventions,
The flying iron birds,
Swimming steel fish,
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Jahan Zeb
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Shahzia Batool 14 March 2012

Very deep, n thought provoking...keep writing...n thanks for sharing...

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Aditi Khandelwal 20 February 2012

Really liked this poem... We are forgetting our values and have lost our path in the competition... Nice write... Aditi

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Farah Ilyas 03 February 2012

Yeah there z need to seek our right path....man has forgotten his destiny completely...well done u done a great job brief & straightforward touched the heart..

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Eric Cockrell 03 February 2012

very good... very much true! we have stumbled greatly, and need to find our path anew!

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Dave Walker 03 February 2012

Like this, short and sweet, great poem.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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