Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Civil War Of The Sister Cities Comments

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Things weren't good from the beginning
we were pitted against each other
our relatives would boldly compare us
as if we were deaf beings from another continent
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Daniel Brick 05 April 2017

This poem details the worst kine of war - one with no objective and thus no ending, .It's just two persons of strong personalities and even stronger wills who won't budge. The speaker reveals how much they have common but it just makes them evenly matched. Is it old age or emotional weariness that makes one declare a truce? It may be too late. I hope not: imagine the stories they could share with delightif they just turned the intimacy of competition into the intimacy of friendship. They need a Good Angel to nudge them toward a different kind of victory - mutual forgiveness! !

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Nika McGuin

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