Thursday, August 13, 2009

Cityscapes: (Improvisation 10 04 2004) Comments

Rating: 5.0

God wept the seas we walk around
lands of continent man divide the charity
the sea’s covers spread over naked kingdoms
like condoms stretched over revived seed
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Lee B. Mack
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Kerry O'Connor 22 August 2009

I like the use of strong images in this poem. Your first line captures the imagination.

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Lee B. Mack

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