Thursday, August 27, 2009

Cityscape Comments

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A swirl of shadow races across
The clear blue sky that seem to hang
Turning mid-air to follow a pathway
Imprinted on the memories of hundreds
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Fiona Davidson
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Michael Gale 05 November 2009

I would have rated this a ten. God bless us all-MJG.

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Michael Gale 05 November 2009

Hi Fiona: I can only think of 3 words to describe this poem. 1.Nice! 2.Very 3.Nice! ! God bless us all-MJG.

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Sue Sie 27 August 2009

Home to roost...great descriptive write... Sue

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Carol Gall 27 August 2009

images your words leave in ones mind

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Jake Erkens 27 August 2009

Beautifully penned there Fio. This one is special because of its descriptiveness and imagery. Paints a very colourful picture. (At least to me) Ty, Jake

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