I've been in this scene so many times
coming back to the very same place
I see the world's creative lines
etched into and around your face
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I am not a city girl, but i felt the beauty of it in your poem. another great work
Great work, I can see this one as a song too... you are a very talented young lady. Take care, Lee
Very well worded! Keep writing these beautiful and down-to Earth poems! Lilly
♥ ... that last 4-line stanza is just so very very open...