Monday, May 28, 2007

Cityland Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been in this scene so many times
coming back to the very same place
I see the world's creative lines
etched into and around your face
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Jade Leven
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Max Reif 22 June 2018

♥ ... that last 4-line stanza is just so very very open...

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Kathleen Alm 24 June 2007

I am not a city girl, but i felt the beauty of it in your poem. another great work

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Lee Degnan 24 June 2007

Great work, I can see this one as a song too... you are a very talented young lady. Take care, Lee

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Gold Flower 07 June 2007

Very well worded! Keep writing these beautiful and down-to Earth poems! Lilly

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Jade Leven

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