Monday, May 5, 2008

City- Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's no green nor any blue
No sea nor a hill of hue
Our eyes gain no tranquil glory
Finding there no prairie
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Indira Renganathan
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

boring and dangerous too taking this morning walk on the city roads...a very practical subject

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Onelia Avelar 14 August 2008

Very vivid, little bit ironical, descriptive, with a good rhythm reffering to the rhythm of steps while walking. I can imagine, I like city-walk. Very well penned! Regards, Onelia

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