Thursday, June 13, 2013

City Streets. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stand in the shadows
And watch.
As the sun burns the pavement,
And girls with cracked heels
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Owain Glyn
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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

Excellent Owain, you are a great observer of life. Very well crafted.

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Danny Draper 17 June 2013

A great snap shot of a few people and definitely characters and character types no doubt.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 June 2013

detailed observation, good imagery unite in a beautiful flow make this poem special good work

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