City Streets Comments

fine work, picturesque!

Hi Poet, I thought I had read all your poetry. I have never read this magnificent one. You took me there with you on 'City Streets.' You write, great, great, poetry. Wonderful read.....'Enjoyed'

I like the flow of this poem, you took me on to the city streets where I saw all the hussel and bussell of the night workers. The working women and drug dealers, a sad case indeed. I think I will try harder to move to the courntyside and enjoy the view. Thankyou for this excellent poem Ivor.--Melvina--

I like the way you vary the structure in your poems. I really like the way you used enjambment and the refrain. I think for the sake of sanity I won't count syllables and stress marks but it sounds so good when I read this that I imagine you follow some other structures that have names to describe them but I'll just have to say that I like it, whatever you did-it reads well.

Ah... reading you is indeed sometimes like coming home. Grand work. t x