Wednesday, June 20, 2018

City Scenes Comments

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An old woman sits on a folding chair
Outside a dilapidated shop with peeling paint
Talking on her phone in bellicose sing-song tones
That sound alien to me but like home to someone.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 31 August 2018

good questions in the fifth stanza, suzanne. they have particular poignancy right now for me as i have taylor's words from my stroke of insight fresh in my mind from today's reading of her. -glen

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2018

Hi Suzanne, Marvellous piece of write. The vagaries of life make us wonder about its very purpose..... A homeless man needs care, but life is so uncaring, so he won’t get it...Everybody is so engrossed in his own importance...... Vow! Very poignant poem...

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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

The city life has many scenes. Well penned.++10

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Suzanne Hayasaki 20 June 2018

Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a comment Robert!

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