Wednesday, April 25, 2018

City's Park Comments

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I went out in a splendid evening
to the city's open park,
there was shenanigans,
one pony was lame,
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Upendra Majhi
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2018

that by all costs, men wanted fame. I threw a carrot to the pony, that made a cocophony. irony.. pictured very well with the throwing of the carrot............ a fine poem. dear poet. tony

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Upendra Upm 26 April 2018

Thank you Tony.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

A beautiful poem! Enjoyed the last two lines most! Thanks for sharing....10

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Upendra Upm 26 April 2018

Dhanyabad Mr. Swain.

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