Tuesday, June 19, 2007

```city Of The Damned (Epic Soul Story) ``` Comments

Rating: 5.0

It shall echo the screams of the damned

brutal and loud their suffering will pierce all that hear
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Suzan Gumush 29 July 2008

sends a message of truth to remind those who betray where they are heading. The only problem is there are far too many of them out there. Lol. Beautifully and very well crafted. Give you 10. Best wishes.

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Evaughn Gray 23 February 2008

wow..beautifully written i love dark poetry..it was marvelous..~hazel

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

Good poem but such darkness, where is the light. Melvina

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dead before I died 10 July 2007

I like the macabe tone of this piece!

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David Harris 19 June 2007

Ramon, those who betray should be sent to the city of the damned. If they betray one, then they will betray all other who cross their path. Yet another great poem my friend. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it. David

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