Monday, September 1, 2014

City Of Gardens Comments

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Having thousands of gardens,
Having millions of flowers,
Is the city of gardens!
With wise learned wardens!
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Khalid Saifullah 31 October 2015

An amazing poem........................................................

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

As far i know Lahore in Pakistan is said to be city of garden.Lahore is an old city with history of thousnds yrs. Its culture n beauty is intact. beautiful write sir.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 September 2014

Youth of the land and the way of bringing up the symbol used garden- earth, flowers- children lovely write

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2014

Beautiful garden where flowers fear none and they are content with the small piece of land. Very true said, And the life of flowers, Is increased by a day, And the land is inspired, Furthermore for the flowers! ....land where such positivity flows, flowers will bloom beautifully. Loved the way you presented this poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 02 September 2014

I wonder what that comment is! Any way glad to know that my comment has been so inspirational for you to compose such a lovely poem Akhtarji! Yes, I too believe that words have so much of power! THANK YOU!

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Salini Nair 02 September 2014

the life of flowers, Is increased by a day, And the land is inspired, ................wish all life would have been like this..............

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 September 2014

And the life of flowers, Is increased by a day, And the land is inspired, Furthermore for the flowers! A poem on flowers of words, we call it poems.

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