Sunday, January 30, 2011

City Of Coldness Comments

Rating: 3.7

Snow claims walkways: restless crystals,
like they are at its mercy, but who really is,
which is the test of wind, or the speed of air.
Intimately involved, shovel and man? Most
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Lamont Palmer
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Richard Dates 06 January 2022

We are all in some sort of Donner Party.

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Robert Charles Howard, 19 October 2021

Love this poem! Rich in music and keen in structure.

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Melissa Robinson 01 January 2014

You are very talented, each line creates a vivid picture in my head. keep up the good work.!

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Heather Wilkins 29 July 2013

good write. extra nice imagery enjoyed

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Patricia Grantham 24 July 2013

Loved this poem Lamont. Living in a big city can be cold and aloof. Everybody is about doing their own thing. The icy streets and gusty winds adds to the blatant surroundings. Good write.

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Shadow Girl 10 June 2011

Beautiful personification. You have a unique talent. When are we going to hear a new poem from you?

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Pranab K Chakraborty 09 February 2011

Skilled craft of expression haunts our intelligence. Only emotion can't hold its nectar. Beautiful crystal of poetic soul, at least, we can have the fragrance of beauty. Last of all we can also imitate the sound: MOST / OF WHAT YOU DO IS SURVIVE..... Regards, pranab 10+++

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