Saturday, January 11, 2014
City Night Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Night become day with flash light
The life become alive to offer delight
The whole of city comes to sudden movement
Silver spoons exchange place at the moment
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
11 January 2014
wording is great in this poem May Lynn7 minutes ago wonderful! Comment +1
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8/3/2025 5:02:38 AM # 1.0.0
Strange word use Jessie Ennans5 minutes ago I liked the different ways you used your words, but in some places it feels awkward, Their existence is at stake even after proves hard tests. It feels like you were forcing that thought to try and fit, and this is what happened. Also, the poem feels dry, and distant from the life it describes. It's a matter-of-fact kind of poem, which may have been your intention, but for the reader, it feels like it denies us a journey into the underbelly of city night life.