Saturday, July 12, 2014

City Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking around I feel a sorrow
Not everyone is living for tomorrow
People are just trying to survive
Some needing a second chance to thrive.
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Geraldine Kelly
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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 13 May 2019

Beautiful poem. So enjoyable it is.100+++++++

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John Beaton 29 August 2018

Heartfelt sentiment and images to match. Reminds me of Cat Stevens's Streets of London.

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Geraldine 16 September 2018

Thank you John.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Geraldine. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Margaret Moran 13 July 2014

A good description of the place of greed in today's world and of what it is doing to people!

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