Tuesday, April 29, 2008

City Dove Comments

Rating: 5.0

sing my little city dove, sing
for their is delight in the songs you bring,
upon sunny day's and warm skies
while sirens ring and the city cries.
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M Rene Riel
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Sandra Fowler 15 July 2009

Very poignant. May that little dove always sing for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

theres something about watching birds fly, isn't there, a sort of free and longing emotion that flows through you. this poem demonstrated that better than i'd think was possible. thanks

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James B. Earley 02 May 2008

There is a sense of longing, anticipation.........as in seeing the dove leave my backyard, then anxiously await its return! Excellent.

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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