Saturday, January 13, 2007

City Day. Comments

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The gull fiys across a field
as the rain falls.
A crow moves thruogh the grass
like an undertaker in a crowd
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Roy Storey
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Phillip Sawatzky 22 January 2007

Roy, This poem reminds me of when I was 17, and took a trip to New York City-the greyness, seeing a busload of zombies blur by, no expression on their faces-what I like in particular with your City Day is the line, A crow moves through the grass like and undertaker in a crowd....Good one. Phillip

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