City-Bus Comments

City-bus can’t cross the globe Can’t find your cyber destination! So true, dear....My journey thru your City Bus was enjoyable...10+...Brishti

interesting medley of images and events...

The title caught me. I knew it was different and modern. Different in theme, different in thoughts, I could say this is based on an experience while daydreaming. Haha, I'm not sure.; p This is inspiring, I'll write something like this.

You describe a very vivid and powerful scene. It leaves me in a bit of a quandary.

Its too modern and touchable regarts

Ashraful bhai, I liked the imagery, and the thought process reaching a climax in the last two lines! Is it a translation from your Bengali one? -Raj Nandy

A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?

Ashraful, Interesting poems... Also it is perfectly written. The dream 'the noble has put' for the poet. But I would prefer mine the old car... Or on foot... From me 10... Tsira

Conscious of time and possibility you write with deceptive depth.. nice work.

Loved this one going nowhere slowly, means time to think, time to hope and time to dream. Bob

Well Ashraful, Citybus does have its limitations.But still, here you are able to conjour such fleeting urban imagery.