Friday, August 16, 2013

City Bred Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drive fast must get outta here
Run back to the city’s lights
Daytime beauty hides the scares
Can fall prey to the swallowing nights!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Gleb Zavlanov 16 August 2013

A great write. I really liked the theme of the poem. Bravo! Also, thanks for commenting on 'March of the Soldiers.'

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Mohabeer Beeharry 16 August 2013

I would be lost, really. I love the country side, closer to nature Good write though Mohabeer Beeharry

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Daytime beauty hides the scares and monsters loom in shades unknown.... So drive back to the city of lights! Yes, rustic beauty in day time is so alluring, but with nightfall, it can be scary! ! A lovely write Pradip! !

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

A great poem, like it., a great write.

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