City Boy Comments

A city boy usually is plagued by an identity crisis! He poses to be someone refined and sophisticated before others, but actually he is somebody else in his inner self. He suffers from a kind of drudgery and he often experiences a sense of lifelessness. A sure 10

My cars a Camry, shiny and electric still I drive down roads called angst and dread living a virtual life, never fully connected showing joie de vivre but emotionally dead I assume that this is a semi humorous and semi serious caricature! Powerful diction and arresting presentation!

Yes, man is a bundle of a lot of emotions, wants and wishes, and what not. Everyone, but may be a city boy more so. Nice reading.

if your beautiful and long and strong you are like a city bull all gals love you but if u r a Cancerian womanish SOFT appeal still all gals and guys will your love steal that's why u r the most popular one city boy nay urban on PH a LONE villager will also come

But I'm a city boy, who likes his toys I wear nice clothes, and pretend their gold with a stiff upper lip, I'm armed and poised but I'm still just a cousin of an old slime mold.......touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.

But I'm a city boy, who likes his toys...the beauty of this wonderful poem lies with this tender expression! A fabulous poem....extremely well penned (10)