City Blossoms Comments

Your poem makes me very curious, I love the imagery in it though my two favorite points are: a moment can be so precious, stepping into it, might just shatter it. and Cities are concrete shrines to consumerism bowing to a fake idol's feet, tarmac now where's the cobbled streets? Though the idea about the shrine can be read at least 3 different ways so i am a bit curious about that as well. I usually prefer to immediately understand a poem, but in this case I dont mind that there is a bit of mystery, fantasy, even glamours: 3 Beautiful work~