Thursday, November 9, 2006

Circus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dancing balls of fire
Chose freedom in their way
Smiling faces brightly colored
Chose passion to make them stay
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Martine Kolber
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Indira Renganathan 24 August 2009

Enjoyable words....thanks for sharing

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R.k Das 10 July 2009

circus is a poem which portrayes the hardship of circus artist and the hidden agony of jokers, it is so wonderful watching the artists from gallery, , but the artists play with their lives to entertain us, thanx

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~ Jon London ~ 27 June 2008

Very creative piece....I like your approach to writing....a well composed 10 best dishes Jon.

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David Darbyshire 22 November 2006

good write Martine, dave xxx

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 20 November 2006

Creative and impressive! Very, very nice Martine. PS: I love the short verse. Best CJ

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