With pen in hand my mind begins to wonder
Circles and lines half written
Then your name appears
Next to I love you
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Circles and lines and dots of Hope. Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day.
WOW! Blew me completely away! ! ! Beautiful, wonderful words. Very descriptive verses. Well done for getting recognition for the day.
No wonder people go mad with love. Hearts of true love can use practically anything to express his/her feelings, just the same way poetess here uses circles and lines. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for the poem of profundity.
...heart has a mind of its own, but there is power in I love you!
A poem of miraculous discovery. Miraculous to discover something obvious, in full view, but not consciously observed. Until the truth, like geometry, cannot be evaded, cannot be questioned. The most difficult thing is often the most simple. This poem blows the obscuring dust off the heart with gentlest of breath.
A sweet love poem where rhymes of love is written in dots, circles and lines. Enjoyed. Congratulation.
a nice poem about circles and lines and what is going on in one's mind.
Awesome and sweet! ! ! ! ! Congrats on being selected......😍
'I try not to think of you But the heart has a mind of its own Being almost independent and strong willed It has the say for the night' like every stanza in this poem these sentiments are wonderfully expressed, the heart is often rules the quiet of the night, thoughts desires dream states manifest in lines dots circles hoops ever looping back to the one loved in an inescapeable I Love You; a beautifully crafted poem
You have many wonderful comments on this poem already, simply because it is very well done. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day!
Circles and lines appear.... I love how simply and elegantly you speak of the freehand expression of our hearts
Wow Patricia. One of the most beautiful poems I've ever heard. Great write.
The thought of our passionate love always has filled our heart at the time of study.We all faced this situation at least once a life.Nice poem Patricia Gale.
The poem conveys the feeling intended. Thanks for sharing.
'Circles and lines Dots and hoops Hearts filled with I love you Creating the dream that comes every night' Beautifully said. Sometimes we cannot but think about that one person we love.. Thank you.
Working together with the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely poem....Pen in hand and your name pops up besides I love you...Superb.
The title caught my eye and I'm glad I read, Circles and Lines. Beautiful thoughts and feelings of words that are sooooooooo true. Brilliant piece by Patricia Gale.
Circle and lines is an interesting association with words and eventually love and persons. I have often thought of describing love and the beloved with geometrical and geographical expressions but have not yet done so. This is, by no means, a new association since photographs and drawing of the human body are just circles and lines.
a very romantic thoughtful poem of heartfelt love? .......well written