Circle Poem #1. Comments

so every line has the potential to be the first line or the last line? Exit and entry. Interesting... It seems to work in this poem. I'm impressed.

A very interesting concept. circle poems- kind of like a figure 8, something worth doing on its own- not used as a vehicle for anything else. i dig your style in this one. expression for the sake of expression is all any poet should strive for. a beautiful piece, thanks