Friday, April 25, 2014

Circle Of Love Comments

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Cuddle me, I am hungry for your love
Make me wet with your tear soaked veil
Draw circles on my chin with your tongue
Place bubbles of saliva on my taut lips
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2018

This is really a beautiful poem on Love having romantic expression with nice diction. The beginning lines are so amusing. Let me cite here few lines...Cuddle me, I am hungry for your love Make me wet with your tear soaked veil Draw circles on my chin with your tongue Place bubbles of saliva on my taut lips Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 November 2018

Thanks a lot Sir for such a wonderful comment. Gratitude.

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Colleen Courtney 25 April 2014

Nicely written! Nice imagery!

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