Circle Of Life.......Montage Comments

' a single pictorial composition' with angles all beauful....''air tense and world swam''- a thoughtful paradox

truly a mind blowing poem.

dear saddat, loved this poem about you! so you took a full circle, to have her next to you? last two lines were realy good. ritty

'Pendulum’s tap a silent tick tock Deceitful dalliance of wind sock Stunned the mirror on that day As the heathen reflected grey' Indeed nice dr. sakti.

Well I knew how it feels. Nice write.

A well composed poem with nice rhythm and rhyme.

I was drawn to this poem by the word montage in the title. Very original. Quite a story.

Enchanting poem,10++

Circle of Life is a poem of incredible beauty, with both depth and flow, I congratulate you on writting this lovely piece.10++++ without any hesitation.

lovely write.....good compostion as well, thnx 4 sharing

Circle of Life Is between Man and Wife Children but, droplets Who join other streams We should never forget The hand that held Waits to hold till the end! Like ripples spreading out The Circle of Life spreads From life to life, a torch We hand down to new life! Beautiful thoughts expressed so well! Touching! Angel

Another nice read! Great flow of thoughts!

Good montage of the words showing different phases of life but the poem completes its circle like the circle of life. First stanza is more poetic than the others. A good thematic (continuity of life) poem with rhythm and rhyme all in place. This quality is a blessing these days. Best Wishes Naseer

you have woven the poem with your own craft of words.........very good poem.

good narration...poem presentation rhythmic...10

Great write Saadt....your gentle flow of words has enhanced the story behind this poem...