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A n awesome tribute, with the deepest sentiments, for your firstborn. Love it. For the contents and creativity alone - 10.

A soulfelt, beautifully expressed, unconditional love. You have taken an indescribable moment and described it perfectly! Well done! Linda

excellent simile: ''It felt like a sparrow in my rugby-gloved hands'' excellent lyric poem, thank you for sharing.....................10+++++++