[Circle Of Denial]
Love survives the trace-less jolts,
Of distrust, fear,
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A very fine piece...circles of denial..everywhere where love dwells..they appear roaming fearless..loved the metaphors...thanks Love Gul
THIS ONE IS TRULY GREAT PIECE OF WRITING, , EACH WORD AND IMAGE BUILDS UP THE THEME.
great one! ...i like the way you end it.. endings should be poignant enuf to bring that choking feeling to the gullet.good work.
your poems are thought provoking. i enjoyed reading your work. take care and enjoy your poetic life.
words used, ambiance created, imagery so wonderful and alive. the idea your expression and all is stupendous my dear, in my opinion. wonderful piece and thanks for bringing your writing to our attention. beautiful talented poetess. a 10 dear. and i will re-read it over and over again
Denial of love is the denial of life ....denial in the temple of life while worshipping in it rehan
..within hailing distance of glory '..absorbing lines zoobiya. thanks..
very nice......loved it! !