Circle Comments

A wonderful poem --a circle of time ---Birth and death ---Day and night make a full circle---in between lies life.Excellently expressed.

Extraordinarily excellent....beautiful flow of words....very intelligent write....top score

Very well crafted poem with much insight.

Very thought provoking! Excellent write, Fatemeh!

Loved the flow of the poem, poetess Fatemeh.......enjoyed reading......10

Wonderful poem that moves smoothly like a circle that begins with time - then life like a delicate petal...a little Moth....a new dawn...a mixture of day and night.

" Dawn! Is a conflicting meeting Between two close Yet stranger friends Day and night." Admirable! Top score and myfav

Excellent poem. The definitions of time, life, moth and dawn, developed one after the other, make excellent craft.

The gist of the poem is heart touching and deeply meaningful