Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Circle Comments

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I PuT ThIs LoVe In A CirCLe
So ThAt IT WiLL Go On FoREvEr
I CaN'T KeEp It In My HeArT
bEaCuSe My HeArT CaN Be BrOkEn
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Frandy Osias Louis
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Shilesha Johnson 01 October 2008

i like the line that said ' i put this love in a circle so that it will go on forever. i cant keep it in my heart becasue my heart might get broken.' well done. one of the best poems youve written. great job

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David Threadgold 01 October 2008

Within a circle sound a little caged in and unable to be free. a good write and I like the gwerky print well done Dave T

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Indira Renganathan 01 October 2008

So far it is not an eccentric circle it is alright..brave attempt

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