Cinquain Twin (In Free Verse) Comments

Observations of things that pertain to the phases of a life determined by desire and illusion often.

Desire is never satiated, it goes on increasing! It is so natural that a heart in love pines for more and more of warm expressions of love from the loved! We are ever tantalized by Maya! Better to keep away from her deluding charms ! Enjoyed both the five liners, though they cannot be called cinquains! !

beautiful cinquains well written enjoyed