Friday, February 22, 2019

Cinnamon Tea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here serenely
Sipping cinnamon tea
Reading Ferlinghetti
Remembering Paris
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 23 February 2019

so of course you've told us now, suzanne, that you're just like us who didn't appear suddenly whole in verse or whole like athena from the head of zeus or venus on the half-shell—good to see it acknowledged, good to read it in this enjoyable poem. though there is aptitude, genius, and the like, none of us escapes, in some theater of our lives, trial an error, growth in facility, the school of hard knocks. -glen

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 February 2019

A nice trip down the memory lane to revisit ones own youth and go through remembrances those were then very dear and near. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Suzanne Hayasaki 22 February 2019

Thanks for leaving a comment. I'm glad you liked it! - Suzanne

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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