Monday, December 11, 2017

Cinnabar Comments

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Well i just kissed a butterfly

Butterfly kisses on a butterfly
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2017

Wow a cinnabar, an exotic awesome butterfly, just like your lovely poem. Nice u could blow it a kiss. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2017

Love and joy! Natural! ! With the muse of nature. The Butterfly! ! ! Butterfly kisses. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jette Blackstone 13 December 2017

I love discovering amazing insects, moths, butterflies! I spent my summer hiking in the woods and enjoying all of the butterflies and moths. They are incredible to look at close up...Your poem has a beautiful ring to it with the repeated lines. Thanks for sharing your discovery with us! :)

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Dawn Novus 11 December 2017

Thats quite remarkable Blackbird because as i was looking at it i remember thinking it looks like The Crow would look like as a butterfly...how uncanny! Very astute of you Blackbird. Thankyou.

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Blackbird 11 December 2017

A crowbar written by a crow. Use the crowbar to extract yourself.

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