Cinders Of A Lost Life Comments

Now, correct me here Sir Timothy if I am wrong. But I read this as the end of life on earth and those who weep for it? Ten! ! ! Linda

I read this slowly and carefully because I could tell from its structure that it was going to be hard to understand. It was. In fact, I couldn't, despite my best effort, make head nor tail of it. I'm sorry, but that means it gets a 6. I could have given it a 5, but the writing was very sincere and I just couldn't do that. GW62

A powerful message and very good wording. Don't stop writing, you have a gift, so keep it up! And so we go, Paul

Never, never stop word smithing wonderful poem thank you for shareing with us

great job! ! wonderfully expressed.

hey tim, great poetry + 10